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How to write an NZ cover letter (with examples and templates)

Along with your CV, a cover letter is essential to any NZ job application. Let's get you started.

Every New Zealand job application should include a cover letter.

This document is key to showing an employer you’re serious about their vacancy, and for demonstrating what you bring to the table . Despite its importance, many people aren’t sure how to write a cover letter – and their applications suffer as a result.

That’s why we’ve created this guide, giving you advice on everything from what to include, to how to lay it out.

We’ve also snuck in a few examples to make life even easier for you … aren’t we nice?

Cover letters vs. CVs: what’s the difference?

To understand the role cover letters play in job applications, it’s important to realise how they differ from CVs:

1. Purpose:

CVs give a broad picture of you as an applicant – providing details such as educational background and employment history . By contrast, a cover letter targets why you want this specific role, and how your skills and experience make you a great candidate.

While there will be areas of overlap as you select qualifications or abilities to draw out in your cover letter, it definitely should not be an elongated version of your CV.

An NZ cover letter should be no longer than one page, while CVs are usually between one and two.

The most obvious visual difference between these documents and CVs hinges around bullet points.

While your CV should be a bullet point bonanza, cover letters favour full sentences. That’s not to say you can’t have any bullets in a cover letter, just use them more sparingly.

You should include a cover letter with every job application.

What to include in a cover letter

1. your contact info, the date and the business’ address.

At the top of your cover letter should be:

• Your full name, contact details and home address
• The date you submit the application
• The business’ postal address

It should look like this:

Head up your cover letter like this.

2. Your opener

People worry about how to start a cover letter , but there’s a simple formula and structure for getting this right:

Make it personal : start with ‘dear’, and address it to a person – i.e. the hiring manager. If their name isn’t in the job listing, try a good old fashioned stalk of the company website, or ring the business and find out. ‘To whom it may concern’ is a no go.

Make it clear : organisations often list multiple vacancies at a time, so make it obvious which position you’re applying for. A sentence like, ‘I’m writing to apply for the Marketing Assistant role, as advertised on Trade Me Jobs’, will do the trick.

Make it punchy : next, add a snappy one-liner summing up why you’re interested in the role and what you’d bring to their business. Remember, you can go into more detail in the interview itself. For example:

3. Why them

A common cover letter mistake is to only focus on yourself. Before choosing you, employers want to know why you’re choosing them. This helps sort candidates who are genuinely passionate about their organisation from those who are mass applying to anything and everything.

Warning : this section is not about inflating the hiring manager's ego by flattering the company – be positive, but be thoughtful.

Now, it’s time to sell yourself.

This section of your cover letter is where you highlight your most relevant skills and experience.

You can draw on anything from previous work experience to certificates and qualifications. The important bit is linking whatever you mention to the job – simply listing skills is not the answer.

To do this effectively, you need to carefully study the job ad and identify what capabilities the employer values most. If your Trade Me Jobs Profile is up-to-date, you can then quickly skim your skills and experience to find those which most closely match the job description.

Top tip: the more detail you can give, the better. Helped raise sales? Great. Helped raise sales by 6%? Even better.

If you want to add some extra skills or information to this section, a bullet point list is a good option. Note : only do this after introducing your headline examples in full sentence form, as above, and keep your list to three or four concise bullets.

5. Signing off

The end of your cover letter should (politely) prompt the reader to get in touch with you to arrange the next steps. Make sure you end on a high, and continue the energy from earlier in your closing sentence, for example:

How to format a cover letter

With your content sorted, it’s now about nailing the visuals. Cover letters are usually easier than CVs in this regard, as they’re laid out like a traditional letter. However, there are a few things to bear in mind:

• What font should I use? Keep it simple, and the same as on your CV. If your font is hard to read, or too small, the letter will end up in the wrong pile.
• How long should a cover letter be? New Zealand cover letters should be under one page long.
• Should I use paragraphs? Would you read huge, unbroken chunks of text? We doubt it, so make sure to break up your cover letters into paragraphs.
• What are the correct cover letter margins? Leave these at their default setting so your cover letter has plenty of blank space, and doesn’t look crowded.

All done? Not quite.

Perhaps the most important stage of cover letter writing is proofreading. After all that hard work, you don’t want a few silly typos or poor punctuation letting you down.

So check it yourself, then get someone else to have a look, then have a final glance.

Once you’re happy, it’s time to attach it to your application, and hit send.

Al Hall is a regular contributor at Trade Me Jobs and Trade Me Property. He’s dedicated to helping people succeed in their aspirations to find their dream job and place to live.

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How to Write a Cover Letter for an Internal Position

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What is a cover letter for an internal position?

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When applying for an internal job at your current company, you should create a cover letter to accompany your resume. A cover letter distinguishes you as a strong candidate for a promotion. It should outline your experience, qualifications and interest in the new role. In this article, you’ll learn how to write a cover letter for an internal position and provide a template and an example to help you write your own.

A cover letter for an internal position is a written statement that accompanies your application for a new role within your current organization. Similar to a standard cover letter, this type of message should discuss your professional accomplishments and your work experience to establish you as a strong candidate for the promotion.

How to create a cover letter for an internal position

Follow these steps to create a cover letter for an internal position:

1. Follow a standard cover letter length

Cover letters should average 250-350 words that span three to four paragraphs. If you submit a paper application, ensure that your cover letter is less than a page long using 12-point font. A shorter cover letter may not take full advantage of the potential that this introductory message offers, while a longer letter may need a more simplified narrative.

2. Begin the cover letter with the most important information

Start your cover letter by listing your contact information. State the date that you are submitting your application, and then list your company’s contact information, including the hiring manager’s name. Use a professional salutation like “Dear” before writing the body of the letter.

3. Write about your experience as a story or narrative for the hiring manager

Discuss your previous professional experience and the new skills and qualifications you developed in your current role. Even if you are already familiar with the hiring manager or you have discussed your experience in your initial interview, include this information in your cover letter as a reminder and to show your serious interest in the position as well as your readiness. Incorporate these elements into a narrative that explains why you are qualified for the promotion and how your experience will enable you to contribute in a unique way. 

4. Discuss how you have improved your qualifications and skills in your current role

Use examples to discuss how you have learned and advanced in your current role. Consider mentioning training programs you have completed, certifications you have earned or objectives you have achieved. Mentioning the ways you have improved allows you to position yourself as an employee who can continually impact the company in a positive way.

5. Mention specific contributions and accomplishments you’ve made in your current role

Add data and figures to quantify the contributions you have made to the company. Consider mentioning additional revenue you generated or cost-saving initiatives you established. Adding these specifics helps the hiring team understand the value you have added to the company and assess what you could provide in the new role.

6. Thank the hiring manager for considering your application

Conclude your cover letter by thanking the hiring manager for their consideration. Prompt them to take the next step in the process, which may be interviewing you or having a formal discussion about the job opening. Finish the letter with a formal closing like “Sincerely” before adding your signature.

Internal position cover letter template

Use this internal position cover letter template to write your cover letter:

Your Name Your Address | Your City, State, and ZIP Code | Your Phone Number | Your Email Address

Today’s Date

Hiring Manager’s Name Business Name Business Address Business City, State, and ZIP Code

Salutation,

The first paragraph should begin with a statement of your interest in the open position. Briefly summarize your career goals and unique qualifications.

The second paragraph should discuss your qualifications for the job opening. Mention accomplishments and specific figures and data when possible.

The third paragraph should expand on areas where you have improved since joining the company. Connect your achievements and skills to the job opening.

The final paragraph should include a reminder of your interest and a prompt to take the next step in the hiring process. End by expressing gratitude.

Formal Closing, Your Signature

Internal position cover letter example

Consider this cover letter a model for how to tell the story of your qualifications, goals and contributions. Use this example to help you write your cover letter for an internal position:

Hannah Lee 123 Main Way | New York, NY 11110 | 555-555-5555 | [email protected]

July 1, 2019

Pat Smith ABC Business 123 Business Pkwy New York, NY 11101

Dear Ms. Smith,

I am writing to apply formally for the Assistant Sales Manager position in the Sales and Marketing department. I was excited to learn about this newly created role, as I am eager to apply my leadership skills and extensive experience to a management role within the company.

When I joined ABC Business three years ago as an Account Coordinator, I brought five years of experience in the sales field. Since then, I have gained experience managing sales teams and devising strategies, even leading my current team to exceed our quarterly goal by 15%. My initiatives have also increased team-wide efficiency by 10%, further adding to increased revenue for the sales department.

In my three years in this Account Coordinator position, I have developed strong communication, problem-solving and management skills. I believe these skills, combined with my past experience and deep knowledge of the company, would allow me to contribute substantially to the Assistant Sales Manager role and the sales department’s objectives.

I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss this Assistant Sales Manager position with you in person. Thank you in advance for your consideration, and I look forward to talking with you further.

Sincerely, Hannah Lee

Internal Position cover letter examples

Are you hoping to secure a new position within your existing company?

An internal move can be the perfect solution if you love the company but you want to progress in your career or try your hand at a different department.

Either way, you need to submit a persuasive application, and we’ve created the following guide, complete with several internal position cover letter examples to help you do just that.

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Internal Position cover letter example 1

Internal Position cover letter example 2

Internal Position cover letter example 3

The example cover letters here should give you a good general idea on how your Internal Position cover letter should be formatted and written.

The rest of this guide gives more specific guidance on how to create your own cover letter in this format, and even includes some templates you can copy and paste.

How to write an Internal Position cover letter

Here’s how you can write your own eye-catching cover letter, broken down into simple steps.

Write your cover letter in the body of an email/message

When writing your Internal Position cover letter, it’s best to type the content into the body of your email (or the job site messaging system) and not to attach the cover letter as a separate document.

This ensures that your cover letter gets seen as soon as a recruiter or employer opens your message.

If you attach the cover letter as a document, you’re making the reader go through an unnecessary step of opening the document before reading it.

If it’s in the body of the message itself, it will be seen instantly, which hugely increases the chances of it being read.

Start with a friendly greeting

Start you cover letter with a greeting that is professional but friendly.

This will build rapport with the recruiter whilst showing your professionalism.

• Hi, hope you’re well
• Hi [insert recruiter name]
• Hi [insert department/team name]

Avoid overly formal greetings like “Dear sir/madam ” unless applying to very traditional companies.

How to find the contact’s name?

Addressing the recruitment contact by name is an excellent way to start building a strong relationship. If it is not listed in the job advert, try these methods to find it.

• Check out the company website and look at their  About page. If you see a hiring manager, HR person or internal recruiter, use their name. You could also try to figure out who would be your manager in the role and use their name.
• Head to LinkedIn , search for the company and scan through the list of employees. Most professionals are on LinkedIn these days, so this is a good bet.

Identify the role you are applying for

Once you have opened the cover letter with a warm greeting, you need to explain which role you are interested in.

Sometimes a recruitment consultant could be managing over 10 vacancies, so it’s crucial to pinpoint exactly which one you are interested in.

Highlight the department/area if possible and look for any reference numbers you can quote.

These are some examples you can add..

• I am interested in applying for the role of *Internal Position* with your company.
• I would like to apply for the role of Sales assistant (Ref: 40f57393)
• I would like to express my interest in the customer service vacancy within your retail department
• I saw your advert for an IT project manager on Reed and would like to apply for the role.

See also: CV examples – how to write a CV – CV profiles

Highlight your suitability

The sole objective of your cover letter is to motivate recruiters into to opening your CV. And you achieve this by quickly explaining your suitability to the roles you are applying for.

Take a look at the job descriptions you are applying to, and make note of the most important skills and qualifications being asked for.

Then, when crafting your cover letter, make your suitability the central focus.

Explain why you are the best qualified candidate, and why you are so well suited to carry out the job.

This will give recruiters all the encouragement they need to open your CV and consider you for the job.

Keep it short and sharp

When sending a job application to a recruiter or hiring manager, it is important to remember that they will normally be very busy and pushed for time.

Therefore, you need to get you message across to them quickly (in a matter of seconds ideally). So, keep your cover letter short and to-the-point. A long waffling cover letter will overwhelm recruiters when they are running through hundreds of emails in there inbox, but a concise one will get their attention.

So, keep your cover letter to just a few sentences long, and save the extensive detail for your CV.

Sign off professionally

To round of your CV, you should sign off with a professional signature.

This will give your cover letter a slick appearance and also give the recruiter all of the necessary contact information they need to get in touch with you.

The information to add should include:

• A friendly sign off – e.g. “Kindest regards”
• Your full name
• Phone number (one you can answer quickly)
• Email address
• Profession title
• Professional social network –  e.g. LinkedIn

Here is an example signature;

Warm regards,

Jill North IT Project Manager 078837437373 [email protected] LinkedIn

Quick tip: To save yourself from having to write your signature every time you send a job application, you can save it within your email drafts, or on a separate documents that you could copy in.

What to include in your Internal Position cover letter

Your Internal Position cover letter will be unique to your situation, but there are certain content guidelines you should stick to for best results.

To attract and entice recruiters, stick with the following key subjects in your cover letter – adapting them to fit your profession and target jobs.

• Your professional experience – Employers will be keen to know if your experience is suitable for the job you are applying to, so provide a good summary of it in your cover letter.
• Your qualifications and education – Highlight your most relevant and high-level of qualification, especially if they are essential to the job.
• The positive impact you have made – Employers love to hear about the benefits you can bring to them, so shout about anything impressive you have done, such as saving money or improving processes.
• Your reasons for leaving – Use a few words of your cover letter to explain why you are leaving your current job and ensure you avoid any negative reasons.
• Your availability – Let recruiters know when you can start a new job . Are you immediately available, or do you have a month notice period?

Internal Position cover letter templates

Copy and paste these Internal Position cover letter templates to get a head start on your own.

I hope you’re well.

I am delighted to submit my application for the open position of Finance Manager. With 7 years of experience overseeing the finance strategy development as Assistant Finance Manager, combined with my recent master’s in business administration, I am confident in my ability to excel in this elevated role.

Throughout my tenure at CFT Construction, I have successfully led the financial planning and analysis for our residential development unit, demonstrating expertise in advanced financial modelling and budgeting. My implementation of a streamlined financial reporting system in 2021 improved accuracy by 20%, while a new budgeting process reduced variance by 15% within the first year. I effectively guided the multinational management team through their EOY financial analysis as well as spearheading new training initiatives which excellent results, which I would continue in this more senior role.

I am deeply committed to ensuring the growth and sustainability of the company and believe that my specialised operational knowledge would make me a great asset in this role. I am available for an interview at your earliest convenience.

All the best,

Jordan Teller ¦ 07777777777 ¦ [email protected]

I am thrilled to apply for the position of Executive Secretary. With my 15+ years of service as an Administrative Secretary within the company and my NVQ Level 4 diploma in Business and Administration, I am confident that I can continue providing excellent secretarial support in this new role.

Having provided unwavering support to management professionals in both the healthcare and marketing industries during my career, I possess a diverse skill set, including project management, diary coordination, and expert transcription and proofreading abilities. Within Lead Marketing, I have contributed significantly, streamlining client follow-up systems, resulting in a remarkable 20% improvement in response time. Additionally, my implementation of an expense tracking system for the senior management team led to a remarkable 38% reduction in overspending.

As a dedicated and detail-oriented professional, I am eager to further contribute to the success of Lead Marketing in the capacity of Executive Secretary. I would love to discuss my vision for this role further in an interview when you have availability.

Thomas Stanley ¦ 07777777777 ¦ [email protected]

I am excited to submit my application for the new role of Senior Fashion Buyer at our company, where I believe my proven track record, diverse skill set, and passion for fashion will make a significant impact.

With over 16 years of experience as a Fashion Buyer in the purchasing team, I have garnered extensive expertise in conducting market research, analysing sales trends, and sourcing products from vendors across Europe and the USA. My ability to curate merchandise assortments that align with the latest fashion trends and consumer preferences has consistently driven sales and profitability, as exemplified by the 15% sales increase and 12% reduction in online markdowns achieved through data-driven product selection. Additionally, my proficiency in supplier management and negotiation has fostered strong working relationships which has been recognised by my training contract with the customer service team.

I am eager to further discuss my accomplishments and strategic vision for Marks & Spencer’s as a Senior Fashion Buyer. I am available for interview at any time.

Sunni Carter ¦ 07777777777 ¦ [email protected]

Writing an impressive cover letter is a crucial step in landing that Internal Position, so taking the time to perfect it is well worth while.

By following the tips and examples above you will be able to create an eye-catching cover letter that will wow recruiters and ensure your CV gets read – leading to more job interviews for you.

Good luck with your job search!

How to write a cover letter

A well-written cover letter is one of the most important tools you have to convince your employer that you are the right person for the job. When crafted carefully, a cover letter will demonstrate how your skills and expertise can add value to the company you want to work for.

As one of the top recruitment agencies in Auckland , we created the ultimate guide to crafting the perfect cover letter. Whether you’re looking to understand what a cover letter is, what to include or exclude in a cover letter, or for tips on how to write a persuasive cover letter - we can help you get your application to the top of the pile.

Cover letter writing

Writing a cover letter is a task that requires research, consideration and personalisation. If you nail the cover letter, you’ll be well on your way to landing the job you’ve dreamed of. But a poorly written cover letter - even if you are the perfect candidate for the job - will see your CV go straight to the bottom of the pile.

What is a cover letter?

A resume cover letter is a letter to the hiring manager that accompanies the resume. These days, most CVs are emailed or submitted electronically, and the cover letter will either be the first page of the document or included as an accompanying attachment.

The purpose of a cover letter is to give a preview, or a sneak-peak, into what your resume will contain. It links your CV to the role that you are applying for and persuades the hiring manager that your application is worth the time to read.

A cover letter is often overlooked, or approached as an after-thought. After all, you’ve spent hours perfecting your resume – surely the CV is the most important element? Wrong. The cover letter is usually the first thing an employer will see, before they begin to read your CV. Therefore, it’s critical that you invest the time to get your resume cover letter right.

Is a cover letter mandatory?

Imagine your CV is a book: the story of your career. You’ve laboured over the manuscript and hope that it will be published one day. The cover letter is the letter to the publisher, convincing them why they should read your manuscript. It’s the opportunity for you to make a connection and to convince them that your book – or the story of your career – is worth reading.

Some employers specifically request a cover letter. If they do, then you can be confident that they will read it. A cover letter is not always mandatory – however, even if employers don’t specify that a cover letter is required, you should still invest the time to write one. It demonstrates your enthusiasm for the job and shows that you have taken the time to consider the particular role’s requirements and how you can add value to their business.

How long should a cover letter be?

The purpose of a cover letter is to sell your skills and ability to the hiring manager - think of it as your one chance to catch their eye to read your resume.

A good cover letter should be succinct. Keep your cover letter to four paragraphs that fit on one page in total. If your cover letter is any longer, it will only demonstrate to your employer that you lack focus.

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Cover letter strategy

When it comes to writing a cover letter for resumes, remember the three C’s: Connect, Convince and Courtesy. The purpose of the resume cover letter is to first Connect with your hiring manager. Then you should aim to Convince the hiring manager that your CV is worth reading.

Whilst including a cover letter may seem old-fashioned, such Courtesies are highly valued in the professional world, and a professional cover letter will thank the hiring manager for their time reading your CV and considering you for the role.

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Career change cover letter

Making the decision to embark on a new career is one thing; convincing a hiring manager that you’re the right fit for a new industry and job type can be a far greater challenge – one that can demand a compelling cover letter.

If you’re struggling to find the right words to land you that new gig, read on for handy tips on how to write a cover letter for a new career.

What information should you include in your cover letter?

Your cover letter should always include your contact details, and follow a clear structure, to convince the hiring manager that your CV is the one they should read. You should ensure your cover letter adheres to a formal letter format, for example addressing the reader by name.

Here is a definitive list of what to include in a cover letter - and what to avoid.

How to personalise your cover letter

In writing a cover letter, remember that it should never be generic – it should be personalised and tailored to the job and company that you are applying for.

Have attention to detail . Scrutinise the job advertisement and ensure the details are exactly mirrored in your resume. For example, if job applications are to be sent to ‘Stephanie Green, HR Manager’, ensure that Stephanie’s name and title are on your cover letter and the spelling is exact. If the job title that you are applying for is ‘Administration Assistant’, ensure that you don’t write ‘Administration Coordinator’.

Reference relevant skills and experience . If you’ve done your research, you will know exactly what kind of skills and experience the hiring manager is looking for. For example, if the advertisement mentions that they are looking for a Project Manager who is ‘excellent at stakeholder engagement’, you could say; “As a Project Manager with 8 years’ experience, I am known for my ability to influence and engage key stakeholders to achieve business goals.”

Reference the company . In your research, you may have identified what the company goals or values are. Ensure that you reference those goals and values when writing a cover letter, and articulate how they reflect your own goals and values.

How to create the perfect cover letter layout

Learning how to write a cover letter can be time-consuming, but once you have practiced it, it will become second nature.

Investing the time to tailor and personalise the cover letter will always stand you in good stead, and help your cover letter – and CV – stand out from the crowd.

Cover letter templates

If you need to write a cover letter, you may consider using a cover letter template, or cover letter examples to inspire you. Whether you decide to use a cover letter template or not in your job search , it is key to use it as inspiration, or as a stepping stone to creating your unique cover letter.

Always remember that your objective is to stand out, and you can only stand out if you invest the time to craft a cover letter that is personalised, tailored and convincing.

Cover letter pros and cons

When deciding whether or not to use a cover letter template, there are some pros and cons to consider.

• Cover letter examples can save you time, as there will be a standard structure that you can follow. You won't have to spend time thinking about what you should include, as there will be clear prompts to guide you.
• Cover letter templates and examples can also give you inspiration in terms of the key messages that you should include, and the type of language you should use. They also give you tips on correct formatting, and the types of formalities that you can incorporate.
• The purpose of a cover letter is to convince the hiring manager that your unique CV is worth reading. That means that your cover letter needs to be unique, personalised and tailored. If you use a template or an existing example, there is a chance your cover letter could be perceived as being generic, and you won’t be as convincing as you need to be.
• If you use a cover letter template that you have downloaded from the internet, there is a chance that someone else might have used the same template. It is hard to stand out if your cover letter looks exactly the same as someone else’s.

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Dear Mrs. Knight, 

If you're looking for a Sales Assistant with a passion for tech and a deep understanding of the latest trends and advancements in the industry, I'm the tech-savvy sales professional you're looking for! My name is Teina Te Hira, and  I am confident that my unique blend of skills and experiences make me the ideal candidate to support your team and elevate the customer experience at Connect Tech.

I have a proven track record of successfully promoting new products and technology solutions, resulting in a 20% increase in the adoption of cutting-edge products by customers. My ability to communicate the features and benefits of products in a clear and engaging manner has been instrumental in driving sales and enhancing the overall customer experience.

In my previous role as a Sales Assistant, I spearheaded initiatives that led to a 25% increase in monthly sales revenue within the first quarter. By leveraging my strong interpersonal skills and product knowledge, I was able to effectively identify customer needs and tailor recommendations that resulted in a 30% boost in upselling opportunities. These achievements not only demonstrate my ability to drive revenue but also my commitment to providing exceptional service that exceeds customer expectations.

In addition to my sales skills, I'm a team player who thrives in a dynamic and fast-paced environment. I have a collaborative spirit and enjoy working closely with staff to achieve common goals. Through my strong organisational skills, I have streamlined inventory management processes, reducing stock discrepancies by 15% and ensuring a more efficient workflow that optimises the customer shopping experience.

I am incredibly excited about the opportunity to bring my passion for technology, sales expertise, and customer-focused approach to the team at Connect Tech. I believe that my proven track record of driving sales growth, authentic sales demeanour and commitment to fostering a positive team environment make me the perfect fit for the Sales Assistant role.

Thank you for considering my application. I would love to discuss how my skills and experiences align with the needs of Connect Tech. Please feel free to contact me at your earliest convenience. I hope to hear from you soon. 

Ngā mihi nui, 

Teina Te Hira

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A well-structured and organised cover letter is essential to effectively showcase why you're the ideal candidate for the job. To really impress potential employers, your cover letter should be both visually appealing, well-formatted and organised. Here are the most important components to include in your cover letter:

• Header: Your cover letter's header, positioned at the top or sometimes on the side of your cover letter, features your name, contact details, and any relevant links to professional websites. The header is essential for helping your cover letter stand out and enhancing the cover letter’s overall visual presentation. 
• Greeting: The greeting of your cover letter should be personalised to the person who will be reading your cover letter. We recommend using a polite and friendly greeting and using the name of the potential employer when known to help establish a connection with the reader. 
• Introduction: Your cover letter introduction should grab the attention of potential employers and make them want to learn more about you. It’s essential to include both the company name and the specific position you’re applying for in this section.
• Body paragraphs: The body paragraphs of your cover letter provide room for you to detail your accomplishments and essential qualifications for the role. This section is often considered the most important component of your cover letter. 
• Conclusion & sign off: The conclusion of your cover letter usually includes a strong call-to-action statement that encourages employers to reach out to you at a later stage. In this section of your cover letter, you should reiterate your passion for the job role, and sign-off with an appropriate farewell, such as “Yours sincerely,” or “Ngā mihi nui.”

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How To Master a Cover Letter for New Zealand [Examples & Tips]

Although you might don’t want to, yet in most cases, you need to include a cover letter when applying for a job in New Zealand. NZ cover letter is similar to other countries; it should show the company why you are the right candidate for the job. Take your time to write a personal and customized letter. Never send the generic one; this can ruin your application from the start.

A cover letter is a monumental part of your job application in New Zealand. A good cover letter should answer the main question, which is why the company should hire you. Additionally, it must provide information on how you can bring value to the company and help them with the challenges. A cover letter should showcase the relevant skills and experience you have.

In most cases, businesses and recruiters in New Zealand will require you to attach a customized cover letter. And it’s a good thing for you. In the end, the cover letter is a claim for the role – it’s your chance to highlight and match your experience against the job description and to clearly state what you can offer your potential employer.

If you are looking for a job in New Zealand, I would highly recommend going through the Job Hunter’s handbook made by Careers.govt.nz.

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Is a cover letter necessary in New Zealand?

Unfortunately, yes, you need to include a customized cover letter when applying for a job in New Zealand. Almost  half of the recruiters reject applications without a cover letter. A high-quality, customized cover letter tells the manager you are a dedicated professional. It should be only a page long.

A resume or CV alone can show your achievements and qualifications, but it can’t tell the story and explain why you choose this company in particular. That’s why we need a cover letter. It’s also a great tool to show your personality and motivation. It must show the employer you are an asset to their company.

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Tips and guidance for a winner cover letter

So what is a cover letter, and why it’s so important for your job application in New Zealand?

• Cover letter is your first point of contact with employers .
• It should fit on one page .
• It needs to explain why you want this job .
• It should relate to your CV .
• It should describe your relevant skills, experience, and accomplishments .
• It should show the evidence that you have researched the company and that you are the right candidate.

If you follow these simple statements, you should already be able to create a decent letter. Yet, if you want more, read this article to the end and follow the advice.

The winning tactic here is focusing on  them , not just on  you,  which will ultimately make you stand out from other applicants

When writing your cover letter, pay attention to the following:

• Do very extensive research about the company. Show it in the cover letter.
• Reflect on the company’s vision.
• Highlight specific achievements and successes that show you can address the challenges the employer is facing.
• Show your personality.
• Prove that you understand the challenges of the company.
• Explain your motivation and fit for the position.
• Presents how your skills and experience as a solution for the company.
• Create a list of job keywords that are mentioned in the job ad. Include them in the cover letter.
• Address the cover letter to the right person, e.g., the hiring manager or recruiter
• Be clear and concise
• Have a structure in the letter – beginning, middle, end
• Use active words to describe your work – accomplished, achieved, led, created, increased, identified
• Finish with a call to action and ask for a meeting.
• Try to be funny
• Send a generic cover letter — customize each one for the specific job.
• Forget your full contact details
• Generic and boring opening paragraph
• Copy-paste from the CV or job ad
• Start every sentence with “I”
• Write more than one page

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1. research about the company and position.

Your knowledge about the company you are applying to work for is crucial. You must also know all the essential details about the advertised position and how your skills and experience fit in.

When someone reads your cover letter, they must be sure you are the right candidate for this position and for this company. That’s why you must include as many tailored to the job ad details as possible (yet not too many).

So, look for information on the company, its key products or services, its mission, and anything else that gives you an insight into them. Notice the most important details and mention them in the cover letter where appropriate.

You might want to check out the company’s website, its executives’ Twitter feeds, and LinkedIn profiles.

The culture of the organization is vital to note. This will influence your communication style. For instance, you might be more casual with start-ups or advertising agencies but more formal with banks and large corporations.

2. Show how you can help

A company hires you to solve a problem or to help with challenging tasks they are unable to manage. Point out the things you can do for a company and which potential results it might bring. Or maybe you already were challenged with similar tasks? Mention it in your cover letter!

3. Why are you a perfect fit?

The second paragraph of your cover letter should give a clear idea to the reader why you are the one and that you will satisfy the company’s specific needs.

Here you should match the keywords mentioned in the job ad with your skills and experience. You also must show the hiring manager why you want this job, not just any job. Include all the enthusiasm and passion you have.

Match your skills with a job ad

Highlight the key skills and qualities in the ad, e.g.:

• strong written and verbal communication
• technical skills
• analytical thinking
• team player or teamwork
• problem-solving
• time management
• knowledge of software & tools
• specialized or technical competencies
• high level of computer competency
• ability to work well under pressure
• enthusiasm and initiative
• excellent customer service

Include them in the cover letter with real-life examples.

Connections matter in New Zealand

About 70% of all jobs in New Zealand are so-called hidden. They are simply not advertised because hiring managers seek candidates within the company, their circle of colleagues, and people they know before they post a job ad. For that reason, having connections in New Zealand is very crucial.

You are more likely to be invited to an interview if you know a friend of a friend and they got a reference they you rather than just based on your qualifications and experience.

That might be good news for some and bad news for others. Nonetheless, it’s highly recommended to start networking as soon as you land in New Zealand. Join groups, participate in social and professional events, work on your Linkedin profile, and just be proactive.

And if you are lucky to know someone in the company you are applying to work for, mention it in the first sentence or two of your cover letter.

Don’t forget to include

Your cover letter shouldn’t miss these small but key elements:

Your personal value and personality

While skills and experiences are indeed critical, New Zealanders love human connection. If they find you an interesting and nice person, they are more likely to move forward with your application.

Try to be personal in your cover letter; tell them more unique things about you and your experience. Avoid being general at any cost.

Reflect on your experience that relates to the job ad and company profile. What challenges have you faced, and how did you solve them? You also want to provide evidence of the things you mention by using concrete examples, situations, numbers, and facts. For example:

“During the last quarter, my company was challenged by the supply shortage of …We have had 200% more orders than we can ever fulfill. To solve this problem, I was on the lookout for new suppliers for several weeks; after dozens of selling calls, I finally managed to sign a contract with our best supplier so far. I will never come across them otherwise.”

Your enthusiasm

In many cases, people don’t get hired because they aren’t enthusiastic and convincing enough. So, it’s not the lack of skills; it’s your desire and how you show it. If you make it as if it was your dream job, you are more likely to be invited. Avoid at any cost writing in a manner as you are doing a company a favor by working for them.

Hiring managers even say, “Enthusiasm conveys personality.” Some tips that help you to point out your enthusiasm include:

• Show that you have thought about the job and why you would like to work for them.
• Why is this company so brilliant? What they do the best? How they stand out?
• Mention their reputation, performance, and product.
• Remember, it’s about what you can do for them, not what they can do for you.

NZ cover letter structure

Following the formal structure when piecing together a cover letter is as much as important as its content. So, make sure you stick to New Zealand standards. Here is an example:

Dear [Ms. or Mr. Surname],

• Opening – Explain why you are writing this letter (add an interesting one-liner summarizing why you’re interested in the role and what you’d bring to their business.)
• Explain your interest in the job, show knowledge about the company and position
• Demonstrate your skills and experience related to the job
• Explain why you will fit into this role and which value you will bring to the company
• Sign off and offer them to contact you

Yours sincerely,

Your name – Andrew Black.

Make sure you check your cover letter via Grammarly for spelling and grammar mistakes!

Cover letter introduction

The introduction sentences will determine whether the hiring manager will read on or skip your resume. Start your cover letter in an unconventional way and hold the reader’s interest. Here are some tips for a stellar introduction:

• Highlight your achievements in the industry.
• Display your passion and enthusiasm.
• Mention some names and numbers.

A no-go cover letter introduction looks like this:

In response to your posting for the Digital Marketing Manager position, I would like to express my interest in participating in the recruitment process. As a digital marketing manager with 8+ years of experience, I am optimistic that I would succeed in this role.

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Since you already know how to write the header, here is only the main part of the cover letter.

” I am writing regarding the Marketing Manager position you currently have open. As a marketer with over 5 years of experience managing small and larger teams, I would love to take a challenge and work for your company. Marketing is my passion, so it’s to achieve monthly goals, generate new leads & sales, and train the team for success.

In my previous role at (company name), I reached not only the set marketing goals but exceeded them by 80% and, in some months, even 120%. Your company (name) already has brilliant strategies in place, you use paid advertising, social media, and outreach, but I would add other channels to ramp up the reach and revenue. I am experienced and knowledgeable in the SEO scene; hence we can explore new opportunities for your business in this area of marketing.

My previous team of marketing assistants was great! I love to work with people and guide them in our current strategies. At the same time, responsibility for people does not make me stressed or scared but ignites my motivation to bring even better results so we can all be proud as a team.

Besides, my Master’s degree in Business taught me fundamental knowledge about organizations, management, strategy, and agility, which I would be happy to apply when working for (company).

It will be great to talk in person one day. You can reach me at 123456789 any time or via email at [email protected] to arrange an interview. Thank you for your consideration, I look forward to hearing from you.

Cover letter for a visa application

Im most cases, Immigration New Zealand, will request a cover or so-called motivational letter together with your visa application. This is generally a less complex document that you would write for the employer.

Your cover letter for a visa should include:

• Reasons why you are moving or visiting New Zealand
• How are you going to support yourself
• Demonstration of how you meet the criteria for the visa

The content of the cover letter will vary depending on the visa type you are applying for. If it’s, for instance, to join a partner in New Zealand, you should include your relationship to them and explain it briefly.

Therefore, your cover letter should target your visa category’s main requirements. 

When I was applying for a student visa, my cover letter described why I decided to study in New Zealand and what are my plans after my studies. Immigration New Zealand also mentioned in their requirements that the cover letter must include these details.

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A cover letter tells the employer why you are applying for the position. Use our tools and resources to produce high quality, targeted cover letters.

The cover letter is one way to attract the attention of a recruiter or potential employer. Each letter should be customised and show that you understand the employer and their needs, then how your skills and experience will help to meet those needs.

Address the cover letter to a person not an organisation. Sentences should be short and to the point. Use strong verbs that demonstrate action and accomplishment e.g. organised, supervised, coordinated. If there is anything about you in terms of your skills, interests, aptitude or experience that make you unique, then bring this to the employer's attention. Remember to keep the emphasis on what you can offer the organisation to which you are applying, not on what they can offer you.

Writing your cover letter

If you are preparing cover letters for applications for the first time or want a refresher, come to a cover letter workshop and complete our CVs & Cover letters employability module.

For more information on how to produce a quality document that also stands out to an employer, watch this video on How to sparkle in your cover letter .

When you’re ready to write your cover letter use our Cover Letter Builder , and as a guide view sample cover letters from different areas of study. These are based on the letters of graduates who were recruited based on successful applications for vacancies.

More information

For a resource to download and share see our Cover letter guidelines .

You can also find information on writing cover letters and sample cover letters on the Careers NZ website.

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What to do when you're gunning for an internal position

Sometimes the perfect next step can be right in front of you, in the place where you already work. But how do you apply for an internal position without burning any bridges?

This decision can be a double-edged sword. On the one hand, you’re probably a good cultural fit as you’re already with the company and possess valuable knowledge of the business. You might even have the advantage of knowing why the role has become available, and what the hiring manager is looking for. But on the other hand, there may be some office dynamics you have to navigate and potentially awkward situations you might find yourself in.

So what are the key things to consider and do when gunning for an internal position? Career Consultant Leah Lambart, of Relaunch Me, shares her tips.

• Familiarise yourself with your workplace’s internal recruitment policy. To avoid getting yourself into a compromising situation, find out the company’s protocol. There may be a process you need to follow which includes notifying your current manager and asking them to speak with the hiring manager, Lambart says. “You don’t want to upset your current hiring manager by going behind their back – especially if you’re not successful and still have to work with them.” 
• Take advantage of your insider status. As a current employee, you’re in a unique position to get an in-depth understanding of what the hiring manager is looking for, so use it to your advantage, says Lambart. Speak to others in the team or to human resources to ascertain how you meet the criteria. “You probably already know the hiring manager and members of the team you would be joining, which should give you a good indication as to whether you would be the right fit for the team.”
• Be professional and prepare a proper application. “You should always treat an internal application the same way you would an external one,” Lambart says. In other words: prepare a tailored cover letter and resume, using the information you gathered from talking to the hiring manager or members of the team to ensure it includes the key skills and attributes needed for the role. “You should also include recent achievements from your current role that highlight your ability to do the job.”
• Don’t get blindsided by the familiarity of the interview panel. “The interview can be the trickiest part of applying for an internal role, particularly if you already know the recruitment panel,” says Lambart. “Don’t let your guard down and treat it as a casual chat. Be on time, dress professionally and provide clear and concise responses to demonstrate your competency.” Just because you work for the same company doesn't mean the panel knows what you're capable of, so don't make any assumptions and stay on top of your game.

Just because you work for the same company doesn't mean the panel knows what you're capable of, so don't make any assumptions and stay on top of your game.

• Be upfront with your coworkers if you get the job. Avoid any awkward office politics by being honest with your coworkers. “If you are successful in obtaining the role then you may soon be managing colleagues who have always been your peers,” explains Lambart. “Tell them that you feel a bit uncomfortable moving into a management role, but that you believe you have the skills to do the job well and that you would appreciate their support as you transition into the role.” 

At the end of the day, if an internal position arises that sounds good to you, you should go for it. It could be your time to shine, and with the right preparation, application, and communication, you could make it happen. 

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How to write a cover letter for internal position

Cover letter for internal position.

Writing a cover letter for an internal position is slightly different from a traditional cover letter for an external job application, as you already work within the company. Here’s a step-by-step guide on how to write an effective cover letter for an internal position:

Cover letter Format for internal position

Please note that you should customize this template to match your specific situation, the internal position you’re applying for, and your own experiences and qualifications. Be sure to emphasize how your current role has prepared you for the new position and how you can contribute to the company’s continued success.

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Remember to customize these templates to your specific situation, ensuring that you highlight your relevant achievements and qualifications for the promotion you are seeking.

In conclusion, a cover letter for a promotion should be a concise yet compelling document that showcases your accomplishments, qualifications, and enthusiasm for the new role. By addressing the above key points, you can present a strong case for why you are the ideal candidate for the promotion and leave a positive impression on your employer. Remember to customize your letter to your specific situation and the position you are seeking.

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10 Cover Letter Examples for Internal Positions: Get Ahead in Your Career

Are you looking to move up the corporate ladder or make a career change within your current company? Writing a compelling cover letter for an internal position is essential. It’s important to showcase your qualifications and highlight your achievements to your current employer. Fortunately, you don’t have to start from scratch every time. You can find cover letter examples for internal positions that can help you craft your own personalized letter. These examples can guide you and be edited to match your specific skills and experiences. So, why not take advantage of these examples and set yourself apart from other internal candidates? Let’s dive into how you can make the best use of these cover letter examples for internal positions.

The Best Structure for Cover Letter Examples for Internal Position

Hey there! Are you considering applying for an internal position in your company? If so, congratulations! Internal promotions not only offer great opportunities for career advancement, but also give you the chance to continue building upon your existing relationships and knowledge within the organization.

Now, when it comes to crafting a cover letter for an internal position, there are a few things to keep in mind. Firstly, while you may already be familiar with your organization, it’s essential to treat the cover letter with the same level of professionalism and attention to detail as you would for a new job application. To help you out, here’s a recommended structure for your cover letter:

1. Start with a strong introduction: Begin by mentioning your current position and how long you’ve been with the organization. This helps establish your credibility and experience within the company. Then, state the position you’re applying for and convey your enthusiasm for the opportunity.

2. Highlight your accomplishments: Since you’re an internal candidate, the hiring manager likely already knows about your role and responsibilities. Instead of rehashing that information, focus on specific achievements that demonstrate your qualifications for the new position. Use numbers and metrics whenever possible to quantify the impact of your work.

3. Emphasize your knowledge of the company: One key advantage you have as an internal candidate is your familiarity with the company culture and values. Use this knowledge to your advantage by discussing how you fit within the company’s mission and how the new position aligns with your personal and professional goals.

4. Address any potential concerns: If you’re applying for a position that’s a stretch from your current role, acknowledge any potential gaps in your experience. However, emphasize your transferable skills and how you’re already familiar with the organization’s operations, making you a low-risk hire.

5. Close with a call to action: End your cover letter with a strong closing statement that invites the hiring manager to discuss your qualifications further. Again, express your enthusiasm for the opportunity and emphasize your commitment to the organization.

In summary, the best structure for a cover letter for an internal position includes a strong introduction, highlights of your accomplishments, emphasis on your company knowledge, addressing potential concerns, and a concluding call to action. Good luck with your application!

7 Sample Cover Letter Examples for Internal Position

Sample 1: applying for managerial position.

I am excited to apply for the managerial position available at our organization. I have been working for the company as a sales representative for four years, and I believe my experience has equipped me with the necessary skills to take on the new responsibility.

As a sales representative, I have been consistently meeting my targets and even exceeding them. I have also been taking on additional tasks beyond my job description, such as training new hires and leading sales team meetings. I am confident that with my dedication, attention to detail, and extensive knowledge of the company and its customers, I can excel as a manager.

Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to discussing my qualifications further.

Best regards,

[Your Name]

Sample 2: Seeking Promotion to Senior Developer

Dear [Manager’s Name],

I am writing to express my interest in the senior developer position that has become available. Over the past five years, I have worked for the company as a software developer, contributing to many successful projects that have helped grow the business.

Throughout my tenure, I have consistently demonstrated my technical skills, consistently providing high-quality work that has earned recognition from my colleagues and superiors. I have also promoted collaboration among team members, leading to increased efficiency and a positive working environment.

With my experience and expertise, I believe I am well-suited for the senior developer role. I am confident that I can use my skills to help the company meet its evolving business needs and address the challenges that come with it.

Thank you for considering my application. I am excited about the opportunity to leverage my experience and knowledge in serving the company in a more elevated role.

Sample 3: Application for Executive Assistant Position

I am writing to apply for the executive assistant position currently available in the company. I am currently working as an administrative assistant, where I am responsible for the day-to-day operations of the department.

My experience as an administrative assistant has given me the skills necessary to succeed as an executive assistant. I am well-versed in organizing and prioritizing the workload, handling sensitive and confidential information, managing calendars and meetings, and coordinating with internal and external stakeholders effectively. I am also experienced in using productivity tools such as Microsoft Office, Google Docs, and project management tools.

I look forward to discussing my qualifications and experience further with you. Thank you for considering my application.

Sample 4: Request for Part-Time Schedule

I am writing to request a part-time schedule for personal reasons. As a loyal employee of the company for over seven years, I have consistently met and exceeded my targets, effectively contributing to the growth of the business.

Due to recent developments in my personal life, I would like to request a part-time schedule that allows me to maintain my work commitments while attending to my personal responsibilities. I am willing to work flexible hours or remotely if necessary to ensure that my work obligations continue to be fulfilled.

I appreciate the company’s support in ensuring a healthy work-life balance for its employees and request that you consider my request as soon as possible.

Thank you for your understanding and support.

Sample 5: Seeking Transfer to Another Department

I am writing to request a transfer to another department within the company. I have been working for the company as a customer service representative for four years, and I am interested in exploring new opportunities that will challenge me and allow me to grow professionally.

I would like to request a transfer to the marketing department, where I believe I have the skills and experience to contribute meaningfully. I have always had a passion for marketing and have been taking courses and attending industry conferences to improve my knowledge and understanding of the field. I am enthusiastic about the opportunity to use my marketing skills and apply them in a more elevated capacity.

Thank you for considering my request.

Sample 6: Application for Human Resource Manager Position

I am writing to apply for the human resource manager position that has become available within the company. I have been working in the human resource department of the company for the past seven years, where I have gained valuable experience in handling recruitment, employee relations, benefits administration, and performance management.

As a human resource manager, I believe my skills and experience can benefit the company significantly. I understand that the success of an organization lies in its people, and my goal as a human resource manager will be to ensure that the company attracts, retains, and develops the best talents in the industry.

Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to discussing my qualifications further with you.

Sample 7: Seeking Job Sharing Arrangement

I am writing to request a job-sharing arrangement to enable me to meet the commitments of family while maintaining my career. As a dedicated employee of the company for the past six years, I have contributed significantly to the growth of the business through my contributions as a sales representative.

Due to the recent addition of a new family member, I am interested in exploring flexible work arrangements that will allow me to focus on family responsibilities while also contributing to the company’s success. I am confident that a job-sharing arrangement will enable me to meet these needs without affecting my work commitments or productivity.

Thank you for your understanding and support. I look forward to discussing the potential for a job-sharing arrangement further.

Tips for Writing a Cover Letter for an Internal Position

If you are interested in applying for an internal job position, it’s important to write a cover letter that showcases your skills, experience, and qualifications. Here are some tips to help you create a compelling cover letter:

1. Address the Letter to the Hiring Manager

It’s always a good idea to address your cover letter to the hiring manager or the person who is responsible for filling the position. This shows that you have taken the time to research the company and the position, and that you are serious about your application.

2. Highlight Your Accomplishments

Your cover letter should focus on your accomplishments and the contribution that you have made to the company. Highlight specific examples of how you have added value to your current role, such as increasing sales, improving customer satisfaction, or developing new processes or procedures.

3. Demonstrate Your Knowledge of the Company Culture

Show that you understand the company’s values, mission, and goals, and that you share these values. Demonstrate your knowledge of the company culture, and how you have contributed to it in your current role.

4. Emphasize Your Transferable Skills

Highlight your transferable skills that you have gained in your current role, such as communication, teamwork, problem-solving, and leadership. Show how these skills are relevant to the new job position.

5. Express Your Enthusiasm and Motivation

In your cover letter, express your enthusiasm and motivation for the new job position. Explain why you are interested in the role, what you hope to achieve, and how you see yourself contributing to the company’s success.

6. Customize Your Cover Letter

Customize your cover letter to the job position and the company. This shows that you have taken the time to research the company and the position, and that you have a genuine interest in both.

By following these tips, you can create a compelling cover letter that showcases your skills, experience, and qualifications for an internal job position.

Cover Letter Examples for Internal Positions: FAQs

What is a cover letter for an internal position?

A cover letter for an internal position is a formal document that goes along with your job application. It mentions your interest in the open position in your current company and how your qualifications, experiences, and accomplishments make you the right candidate for the job.

What should be the length of a cover letter for an internal position?

A cover letter for an internal position should be concise and to the point, and ideally be one page. It should not exceed more than 500 words, as you don’t want to bore your reader with lengthy paragraphs.

What are some best practices for writing a cover letter for an internal position?

Some best practices for writing a cover letter for an internal position includes assessing the job description, showcasing your professional and personal growth within the company, highlighting your achievements and job responsibilities, mentioning relevant skills and experience applicable to the job, and expressing your enthusiasm and passion for the opportunity.

Can I reuse a cover letter I have used for an external job application?

No, you should avoid reusing cover letters used for external job applications. Instead, tailor the letter to the internal position you are applying for by focusing on the company culture, specific accomplishments, and skills you have gained while being employed there.

Should I mention salary expectation in my cover letter for an internal position?

No, it’s not necessary to mention salary expectation in your cover letter for an internal position. As you are already an employee of the company, the hiring manager will likely know your current salary, and the hiring process will include negotiations with HR or your supervisor.

How long does it take to write a cover letter for an internal position?

The duration of writing a cover letter for an internal position depends on how well you research the position, company culture, and company goals. Plan to spend about 3-4 hours crafting your cover letter, including reading the job description, reflecting on your experiences, and writing, editing and proofreading the letter.

Is it okay to ask for feedback on my cover letter if I don’t get the job?

Yes, it’s a good practice to ask for feedback on your cover letter even if you don’t get the job. It will help you self-evaluate your portfolio and enhance your chances of landing the next opportunity.

Wrapping it up

Cover letters can play a crucial role in helping you land an internal position within your organization. With these examples, you can craft a compelling letter that showcases your skills and experience, and highlights your passion for the job. We hope these examples have provided you with the inspiration and guidance you need to write an excellent cover letter. Thanks for reading, and be sure to bookmark our page for more useful career tips and tools. Good luck!

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Cover Letter for an Internal Position (Examples & Tips)

Whenever you find a new job opening in your current company, you might want to get that job. However, in other circumstances, you might get bored working in the same department or want more money to meet your needs. In these circumstances, you must write a cover letter for an internal position. In addition, it is a cover letter to your employer if you want to change your position or department while staying in the same company.

Writing an internal position cover letter introduces yourself and explains why you are interested in the position. A good cover letter will demonstrate your ability to communicate and sell yourself. Therefore, it should be concise and free of errors.

In your cover letter, focus on your accomplishments in your current job and how they align with the requirements of the new position. In addition, make sure to highlight any skills or experiences that would make you a successful candidate for the new role. Doing this will show that you are qualified for the job and motivated to make an impact in your new position.

This article is an elaborate discussion of writing a cover letter for an internal job position, including:

• What an internal position cover letter is
• How to apply for an internal position
• Differences between an internal position cover letter and a standard cover letter
• Steps for writing an effective cover letter for an internal position
• Best practices and tips to consider when drafting internal position cover letters
• What to do if you want to land an internal position within your organization

What is an Internal Position Cover Letter?

An internal position cover letter is a cover letter that an employee writes to apply for an open position in their company. A company employee writes an internal position cover letter to apply for an internal position that is currently open. It highlights your experience, skills, and qualifications and supports your claims. An internal position cover letter is often used when internal employees are looking to move into another department or when employees want to change positions within their current company.

How to Apply for Internal Position

When you are interested in an internal position that has opened up at your company, it is crucial to follow the proper steps to apply for the job. You may be familiar with the process of applying for a job . However, specific details are needed when applying for an internal position.

Below are some pointers on how to apply for an internal position:

• First, you need to know the availability of a position . You can usually find all the open positions by checking your company’s internal port, contacting human resources directly, networking with your colleagues, by asking the manager if they can put you up for a promotion.
• Next, check the eligibility requirements . Ensure you qualify for the job before applying. Look at the requirements and whether they match your skills.
• The next step is preparing your cover letter .
• Lastly, prepare for the interview . Internal interviews are very similar to regular interviews.

Internal Position Cover Letter Vs. Standard Cover Letter

An internal cover letter is a type of cover letter used when applying for a position within a company. This differs from a standard cover letter when applying for a position with a new company. You will want to include specific things in an internal cover letter that you would not necessarily include in a standard cover letter.

For example:

Recruiters are familiar with the applicant in the case of a cover letter for an internal position or promotion. They know about their background and experience, so applicants record details as honestly as possible.

However, for applicants using standard cover letters, employers are primarily unfamiliar with applicants’ employment profiles. Therefore, there is always the possibility that applicants may exaggerate some of the information provided. Therefore, HR managers may be wary when checking the qualifications of external candidates.

Tip: Discussing your career goals with the employer is essential when eyeing a new position. After that, contact the human resources department and demonstrate your intent. Inquire about current openings and discuss different career paths you might be interested in. It would help if you also considered leaving your resume with the hiring manager.

Six Steps of Writing Cover Letter for Internal Position

When writing an internal position cover letter, you must highlight information from your resume that is relevant to the position. You must also highlight why you are the best candidate for the job.

Below are six essential steps of writing an internal position cover letter:

Step 1: Begin with the most critical information

When you apply for an internal position, it is vital to start your cover letter by introducing yourself. Start with your name, contact details, and the date. Then, write the name of the company and the hiring manager’s name. Before you write the letter’s body, address the recruiter with a proper salutation. For example, “ Dear hiring manager.”

Step 2: Use narrative to write your experiences

Narrative writing allows you to write your experiences powerfully. When writing the body of your internal position cover letter, it is best to use narrative writing since you are talking about your job history. With narratives, you can take your experiences and craft them into a story about how those experiences helped shape who you are today.

You should also share the role you would like to be considered for. In this paragraph, you should highlight how you will be able to handle the new role’s responsibilities. Start with why you are interested in the new post and think you would be a good fit.

Tip: Since the cover letter is the first thing someone sees from you, it must be exceptionally well written. A well-written cover letter appeals to management’s interest and compels them to hold an open discussion with you about your potential position change.

Step 3: Explain your current role and how this role has prepared you for a new job

This paragraph is the most detailed of all sections, as it allows you to talk about your current job and what it has taught you. It would be best if you also spoke about how this job has prepared you for the new role you are applying for. You can then wrap up the body of your internal position cover letter by highlighting any relevant skills and experiences that have helped you excel in your current role.

Furthermore, your experience should prove that you’re flexible, driven, and optimistic about the work you’d be doing in the position to which you’d like to transfer . Include a brief description of your current transferrable duties and how the new job matches your skill set and career goals.

Highlight previous experiences or projects relevant to the new job’s functions. Include specifics and tangible results. Additionally, remember to customize your cover letter depending on whether you’re applying for a promotion , changing departments, or taking on a new position within the same team.

Step 4: Show you have made an impact

Write about the impact you have made in your previous/current job. When you apply for an internal position, it is essential to show that you have made an impact at your company. You can discuss some of the projects you have worked on and how they have benefited the company.

You could also talk about any awards or recognitions from your employer. This will show that you are not only a capable employee but also one whom the organization values. It’s advisable to always back your accomplishments with stats and figures which act as hard evidence.

Tip: Quantifying your accomplishments is essential when writing an internal cover letter. When you quantify your accomplishments, it shows the hiring manager exactly what you have accomplished and how many times you have done it.

Step 5: Include a trusted referral

One of the essential elements of an internal cover letter is to have a trusted referral. A referral is someone who can confirm your skills, experience, and qualifications, for example, your colleagues. Sincere endorsements from reputable referrals like colleagues and managers can support the idea that you are the ideal candidate for a position. Include their information, such as their name and contacts, and a summary of why they recommend you for a position.

Step 6: Show your gratitude

Remember to express your gratitude for being considered for the role. In addition to stating that you feel you are a better fit for the position, thank the hiring manager or whoever else is responsible for giving you a chance to advance within the company. Be sincere and enthusiastic, and make sure your letter is free of grammar or spelling errors. However, avoid groveling since you want the recruiter to know you are confident about your skills.

Cover Letter for Internal Position Sample

James Applicant

665 Apple Street

San Diego, CA 33457

580-455-323

[email protected]

August 9, 2022

Ashley Anita

Director, Communications

Walmart Retail

223 Business Rd.

Manhattan, NY 45689

Dear Ms. Anita,

I am writing to formally apply for the Communications Specialist (Retail) position currently listed in the company website’s jobs section. I believe my qualifications and expertise make me a strong candidate for this job. I have been a loyal employee for nearly five years, and during that time, I have come to understand your company, its mission, and its values. I am impressed by the work in the communications department and would love to be considered for a promotion within the retail division.

My current position involves managing social media and developing new marketing content. I am very organized and detail-oriented, attended several seminars to increase my knowledge in my field of work. I aim to become an asset to your team by providing editing services and creating new ways of communicating effectively with the public. I feel my retail industry knowledge will allow me to contribute quickly and efficiently in this position.

Within the past five months, I have been leveraging my talents to work with a team five days a week, learning new skills and assisting in managing social media accounts. This past year has provided me with invaluable experience and responsibility. I feel confident that the skills gained in my current role would help provide an even more valuable service to the new position.

I have also displayed my capacity to interact with representatives from functional departments and business lines, continuously receiving exceptional ratings on my yearly performance reviews from my superintendents. In addition, I oversaw benefits communications and employee relations and coordinated activities to ensure that all projects were delivered on time.

I want to discuss this with you over lunch to negotiate this position. I am confident that I have the knowledge and expertise required for this position. I eagerly await your response. Thank you for your time.

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Practices to Consider While Writing

When writing an internal position cover letter, there are a few best practices to remember. Below are those good practices to consider when writing an internal position cover letter:

Don’t assume

When you’re applying for an internal position, it’s important to remember that you’re not the only one who wants the job. Just because you already work for the company doesn’t mean you’re a shoo-in for the position. Instead, you may have to work hard to prove that you’re the best candidate. Therefore, ensure you write a great cover letter that puts you in a prime position for the job.

Promote yourself truthfully

As you write your internal position cover letter, it’s essential to be truthful about your qualifications and experience. However, that doesn’t mean you can’t promote yourself. Highlight your successes and skills without appearing to be bragging, making you the perfect candidate for the job. With some self-promotion, you can ensure that your internal position cover letter gets you the job you want.

Don’t take it lightly

Although you are probably excited about the promotion, don’t take it lightly and fail to be organized when writing your cover letter. The intonation in your cover letter should show the seriousness of your objective and the experience.

Use a professional format

You must follow the appropriate format when writing an internal position cover letter. When writing an internal position cover letter, it is also essential to use a professional tone. You do not want to give an unprofessional impression or as someone who does not care about the organization’s reputation.

Be honest about your qualifications for the job. Don’t exaggerate your skills, even if you possess certain traits closely related to the position or the company. Don’t lie if you do not have any experience with a particular technology or program.

Remember brevity is important

Keep it brief, using only a few sentences to make your point. Put yourself in the hiring manager’s shoes. How long would you want to spend reading a cover letter? If your letter is too long and there is nothing in it that makes you stand out, the hiring manager could become bored or frustrated very quickly. Cover letters should be 250-350 words long and divided into three to four paragraphs . If you submit a printed copy, ensure your cover letter is no more than a page long and in 12-point font .

What to Do If You Want Internal Position

Suppose you are interested in a specific internal position. In that case, make sure that your cover letter maintains a professional manner at all times. This means avoiding errors such as misspelled words or poor grammar.

Consider the following points:

Volunteer for leadership positions

It is critical to volunteer for leadership positions within the company. This shows your dedication to the company and willingness to work hard and learn new skills. You do not need a promotion to a higher position to be a leader. All you need is a chance to demonstrate leadership skills.

Take advantage of corporate training opportunities

Take advantage of corporate training opportunities if your company offers them. The best way to ensure an internal promotion is to be the best employee you can be and work hard each day. The best way to accomplish this is to learn as much as possible about what it takes to succeed in your desired role.

Know people from other departments

Building relationships with people from different departments is one of the best ways to improve your career and get an internal promotion. Many offices have departmental subgroups where people gather. A person may work in a place over many years and be practically unknown to those outside their team. That’s a challenge if you want to progress through the ranks. This unfamiliarity could work against you.

Communicate with your current boss

Before submitting your internal position cover letter, speak with your manager, and don’t be afraid to communicate with your current boss. They may be able to give valuable insight into what is most important when it comes to achieving success in the position you are interested in.

Use the same courtesies

When you go to your boss to ask for an internal promotion, you must also show respect by being courteous and polite. When interviewing for an internal position, you should follow the same procedures. Don’t let familiarity substitute your etiquette.

Avoid office politics

When applying for an internal position, avoiding office politics is crucial. This means being careful not to say anything negative about your current or previous department and not gossiping about colleagues. Those who get along with everyone are the ones who get promoted and advance to positions of leadership. This is because they maintain positive relations and do not get involved in office quarrels. As a result, they rise above office gossip and earn respect from their colleagues.

Frequently Asked Questions

Yes. Informing your boss could give you a leg up in the interview process. Your boss may be able to put in a good word for you or give you some insight into the company’s plans for the future. Additionally, your boss may appreciate your honesty and forthrightness.

Yes, your manager has the legal right to refuse a transfer or set terms and conditions for relocating to a different position as long as they don’t violate the employment contract or general workplace policies.

At big corporations, you may be able to be transferred to another department or division with very little notice. However, depending on the type of organization that you are working for and your position, you may need to give a month or more of notice before an internal transfer is considered.

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Public sector cuts: PSA union slams Government for Internal Affairs downsize

Raphael Franks

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Kiwis using the internet will be exposed to more sexual abuse material, scammers, and violent extremist content due to job cuts in Internal Affairs ’ digital safety teams, the union for civil servants claims.

The Public Service Association (PSA) has criticised the Government and Brooke van Velden, the Minister in charge of the Internal Affairs Department, for the job losses, which are part of wider public sector job cuts.

More than 6000 jobs have been cut since Finance Minister Nicola Willis asked the civil service to find 7.5 per cent of cost savings.

The PSA called the cuts at the Department of Internal Affairs (DIA) “reckless and disturbing” and questioned why digital safety teams would be slimmed down given the DIA had advised its minister last November of the concerning rise in objectionable content online.

However, van Velden said the DIA had assured her it would be able to meet “the same service delivery” as currently expected after the job cuts.

The DIA announced today its final decisions on cuts in its regulation and policy branch. Seventy-six roles have gone.

A further 22 jobs across the digital safety and anti-money laundering groups have been cut.

Van Velden said some of these roles were already unfilled or had been vacant, “and the teams have delivered their service without the need for additional capacity”.

“This is reckless and disturbing,” PSA assistant secretary Fleur Fitzsimons said.

“More Kiwis will be scammed, exposed to violent extremism and sexual exploitation at a time of rising harm online. It makes no sense,” she said.

“These are workers at the very frontline of protecting New Zealanders from online harm and international crime syndicates. This is yet another clear example of frontline workers being sacrificed for an ideological obsession with small government.”

Fitzsimons questioned whether the cuts were part of an “evidence-based policy”, pointing out the increase in scams, sexual exploitation material and violent extremist content – “the Minister of Internal Affairs knows this – DIA advised her so in November”.

The Herald reported research from Consumer NZ last week which revealed more than a million New Zealand households were being targeted by scammers each year and some 185,000 Kiwis had had money stolen, half of all households nationwide. About $200 million was stolen from scam victims in 2023 alone.

The Herald also reported data from the DIA in February showing there had been a 283 per cent increase in child sexual exploitation reports since 2020. The DIA blocked over a million websites known to show child sexual abuse material in 2023.

Van Velden said the DIA has made “significant progress” in removing child exploitation material recently, signing a deal with the Internet Watch Foundation which would see the number of websites hosting such content blocked increased from about 700 to 30,000 per day.

Fitzsimons said: “We all want a digital world which is safer for our children, but clearly the Minister is okay with decimating our defences. These [job cuts] were first proposed in late April, she’s had nearly two months to stop this, but has chosen not to. And she’s ignored the alarm expressed by experts including the Online Safety Coalition that these cuts are dangerous.

“The Government has said all Ministers went through spending cuts ‘line by line’ so the Minister of Internal Affairs must know what is happening here. This is a price she seems willing to pay to fund tax cuts.

“The Minister told media recently she expected the digital safety team to maintain the same level of service with the available resourcing. Who is she fooling?

“Workers left behind will shoulder increasing responsibilities and risks will rise that those wanting to exploit New Zealanders will get through our weakened protections.”

Fitzsimons also referred to the Anti-Money Laundering Directorate, which works with its international counterparts and supervises more than 5000 financial institutions and other businesses to make sure they comply with anti-money laundering and anti-terrorism measures.

“It’s part of our international obligations to take money laundering seriously,” she said.

“It’s not just New Zealand’s criminal underworld, but international drug rings, gangs, and terrorists who rely on money laundering to finance their activities.

“The rest of the world is investing more in protecting their physical and online borders from rising threats, including more sophisticated cyber terrorism and online scams, yet this Government is blindly going in the wrong direction and exposing New Zealanders to more risk. It’s just wrong.

“All this again shows how poorly thought through the Government’s spending cuts have been and New Zealanders will pay a high price for the mistakes it is making.”

Van Velden encouraged staff stressed about losing their jobs “to make use of the support services available to them by the [DIA]”.

Raphael Franks is an Auckland-based reporter who covers breaking news. He joined the Herald as a Te Rito cadet in 2022.

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