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  1. How to Get the Perfect Hook for Your College Essay

    5. Just Start Writing. Sometimes the hook of your college essay isn't clear. Rather than getting hung up, start developing your essay and see if it adds clarity as to how to best implement a hook. Some students even find that it's easiest to write a hook last, after writing the body of the personal statement.

  2. How to Write a Strong Essay Hook, With Examples

    4 Anecdote. Anecdotes are often used as hooks in personal essays. A personal story makes the essay relatable, creating familiarity with the reader that makes them want to read more. An example of an anecdote hook is a persuasive essay about rerouting traffic on campus that starts with a personal story of a vehicular close call.

  3. How to Write a Hook for an Essay

    For instance, let's say I am writing a statement for a university application and the prompt asks the writer to describe a time when they overcame a great challenge or obstacle. The hook for such an essay might go like this: "I found myself face down on the wet mud, covered in equal parts hot shame and cold dirt.

  4. 27 Outstanding College Essay Examples From Top Universities 2024

    This college essay tip is by Abigail McFee, Admissions Counselor for Tufts University and Tufts '17 graduate. 2. Write like a journalist. "Don't bury the lede!" The first few sentences must capture the reader's attention, provide a gist of the story, and give a sense of where the essay is heading.

  5. How to Write Great Essay Hooks (Tips + Examples)

    2. Bold claim hook. When working on an argumentative essay, I always write with the mindset that nobody has the time to read my thoughts from start to finish.So, I have to get to the point quickly and make a solid argument worth people's time.. That's when opening with a bold claim works best. Condense all your views on the topic into a few thought-provoking lines that would make readers go ...

  6. 73 Essay Hook Examples (2024)

    Techniques for Good Essay Hooks. Here are a few techniques that you can use to write a good essay hook: Use a Quotation: Sometimes, a relevant quotation from a well-known author or expert can help establish the context or theme of your essay.Next time you're conducting research for an essay, keep an eye out for a really compelling quote that you could use as your hook for that essay.

  7. How to Write a Good Hook for a College Essay

    Let's look at five ways to write a good hook for a college essay in greater detail. 1. Surprise the reader! "Yuck!". I yelled as the pigeon pooped on my head. While silly, this sensational situation is not improbable. Perhaps you've had a similarly surprising encounter that left you stunned and questioning your place in this world.

  8. 7 Good Hooks for Essays

    Good Hooks for Essays with College Essay Examples (Continued) 7) Name a common misconception. The common misconception hook challenges readers to rethink an assumption, or something commonly taken for granted. This can be an intriguing start to a college essay, while also demonstrating the writer's capacity to reflect and think critically.

  9. How to Write a College Essay

    The college essay can make or break your application. This step-by-step guide walks you through everything you need to know. ... Option 1: Start with an intriguing hook. Begin your essay with an unexpected statement to pique the reader's curiosity and compel them to carefully read your essay. A mysterious introduction disarms the reader's ...

  10. How to Write the Ultimate Essay Hook

    Here are seven ideas to choose from: 1. Story. Everyone likes a good story. If an interesting story or anecdote relates to your essay topic, the hook is a great place to include it. For example: In January 2023, two children were playing outside in a Los Angeles neighborhood.

  11. How To Start a College Essay: 9 Effective Techniques

    Knowing how to begin a college essay is daunting. It can be hard to write an engaging, authentic opener. But without an interesting hook, you risk getting lost in a vast sea of applications. To this end, we've put together some techniques about how to start a college essay to make your DTDT moment a little smoother and a little less stressful.

  12. 200+ Hook Examples to Grab Your Reader's Attention

    200+ Creative Hook Examples: Ready, Set, Hook. As a student, you know how important it is to grab your reader's attention right away. Stories without strong starts can leave readers feeling uninspired and bored—and that's not what we want! After all, compelling stories require creative hooks to seal the deal.

  13. Effective hooks for college essays?

    Creating an effective and impactful hook for your college essay is crucial, as it's the first thing the admissions officer will read and sets the tone for the rest of your essay. Here are some tips and examples to help you craft a compelling hook: 1. Start with a vivid description or scene: Instead of simply stating a fact or an idea, paint a picture of a specific moment that embodies your topic.

  14. How to Start a College Essay to Hook Your Reader

    The introduction to a college essay should immediately hook the reader. You want to give admissions officers a reason to stay interested in your story and encourage them to continue reading your essay with an open mind. Remember that admissions officers are only able to spend a couple minutes per essay, so if you bore them or turn them off from ...

  15. How to Write a Hook For a College Essay + [Examples]

    Here are some examples of college essay hooks or rather types of hooks for a college essay that you can keep in mind for writing your hook. 1. Question Hook. When you pose a query that is pertinent to your essay or paper, you have created an intriguing inquiry hook. And reading your writing is the only way someone can discover the answer to ...

  16. How to Write a Perfect Hook for Your Application Essay

    Start with Quotations. You can use two types of quotes here: literary citations and inspirational quotes from famous people or influencers in the field. A literary quote would be a perfect hook for your application essay, while quoting influencers helps to support an argument you represent in your paper. But make sure the quote is relevant to ...

  17. Essay Hooks: How to Grab Your Reader With Your Writing

    These hooks position the speaker as quirky, likable, and ready to offer some insight about what their unique life experiences have taught them. Simply put, this is a great way to grab your reader's attention. However, these types of hooks can also be more difficult to write. Unless you have a clear (or funny) story to tell from the beginning ...

  18. How to Write a Hook

    Anecdotal Hook. When a writer uses a short story to relate to the topic and gain the reader's attention, they are using an anecdote. This story can be a short, personal story or one that is a figment of your imagination. Make sure that it relates to the main idea of the paper. Show the relevance that it has to the topic of the paper.

  19. Reading & Writing Center

    Hooks and Grabbers. A hook or grabber is a catchy, compelling opening that is meant to grab readers' attention and draw them into the essay. Examples of hooks/grabbers include: An intriguing question that will make readers curious. A historical or current-events example of the concepts being discussed. A personal example of how the writer ...

  20. How to End a College Essay: Six Strategies

    The biggest mistake students make when crafting an end to their college essay is not taking the conclusion seriously. In essays you've written for class, you may have been encouraged to restate your thesis in the conclusion. While that's a good strategy for an informative essay, a college personal essay is very different.

  21. How to Write a College Application Essay: 13 Tips

    If you've got an idea for an intro hook or a good conclusion, jot them down—though some people find it easier to write the introduction and conclusion after they've written the body. 4. Talk About Your Strengths and Accomplishments ... College essays tend to have word limits (and sometimes minimums). If you surpass the limit, your ...

  22. What's the Common App? Everything to Know for Senior Year

    With the Common App, you write a single personal essay that's sent to all the colleges on your list. This saves you time and effort. It allows you to focus on crafting a strong essay that highlights your unique experiences and strengths. Some colleges may require supplemental essays, which can also be managed through the Common App. 3.

  23. Study shows how students and teachers are using AI for college essays

    In the study, Rubin found a range in the way students utilized AI. Of the 30% who used generative AI for help on their essays, 50% used it for brainstorming ideas, 48% used it for spelling and ...

  24. Read the Affidavit

    Read the Affidavit. Jan. 5, 2023. Share full article. The affidavit provides additional details about the night of the University of Idaho killings. It notes that DNA and surveillance video led ...

  25. Idaho Murders: What We Know

    By Mike Baker and Nicholas Bogel-Burroughs. June 27, 2024. Though a suspect has been arrested and charged in the brutal stabbing deaths of four University of Idaho students, a series of mysteries ...

  26. University of Idaho murders 1 year later: Where the case stands

    Four students were killed in an off-campus house on Nov. 13, 2022. Monday marks one year since four University of Idaho students were stabbed to death in a gruesome home invasion that garnered ...

  27. Coroner Has New Details About Fatal Slaying of 4 U of Idaho ...

    New autopsy details on University of Idaho murder victims. The local coroner is offering more details about the brutal slaying of four college students in Moscow, Idaho, early Nov. 13. The ...

  28. Joey Votto opens up about his retirement decision: 'Writing's on the wall'

    Joey Votto opened up to reporters about his decision to retire from baseball on Thursday. The 40-year-old first baseman said he concluded that the game had passed him by and it was time to step ...

  29. Aer Lingus College Football Classic: What weather looks like for FSU vs

    Here's what you need to know on the weather for the remainder of Florida State vs. Georgia Tech in the Aer Lingus College Football Classic in Dublin:

  30. Rachel Maddow: What Worries Me Most About Election Night

    Ms. Maddow is the host of "The Rachel Maddow Show" on MSNBC and the MSNBC podcast "Rachel Maddow Presents: Ultra." On Dec. 1, 1960, the far-right preacher and racist demagogue Gerald L.K ...